What does “nonevaluative feedback” look like?

31 October 2009

As my students hone their skills as readers who, as an “audience of allies” or “audience of peers,” are providing nonevaluative feedback for their classmates, I wanted to repost some scattered ideas about what nonevaluative feedback looks like, and why I think it is important.
By contrast, when we think about evaluative feedback, we usually mean [...]

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Whitman’s Song as a Cloud

20 October 2009
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Smile O voluptuous cool-breath’d earth!
Earth of the slumbering and liquid trees!
Earth of departed sunset – earth of the mountains misty-topt!

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Our Brains and Our Perceptions

13 October 2009
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I wanted to provide a few “visual illusion” links to some of the things we looked at in TOK class today (like the illusion above, which is in fact not an animation, except that our mind creates one).  This website has quite an impressive collection of them. Below I’ve also embedded a link to [...]

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The Cult of Catcher

10 October 2009

If students want to review parts of my Keynote presentation titled “J.D. Salinger and the Cult of Catcher,” this is a nice time to point out that I post a lot of my presentations online and they are accessible (minus videos) here under “Files.” My slides and presentations are always changing, and therefore the online [...]

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Literacy 2.0

29 September 2009

This article titled “Clive Thompson on the New Literacy” from Wired Magazine is very interesting.  While some people argue that “Facebook encourages narcissistic blabbering, video and PowerPoint have replaced carefully crafted essays, and texting has dehydrated language into ‘bleak, bald, sad shorthand’,” still others–like Andrea Lunsford of Stanford University–are arguing that something good is actually [...]

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TOK Updates

29 September 2009

Since some of my students were a bit confused as to what was asked of them during my travels, I will post this information here as well.  Students may thank me when they see me in the halls for doing this, or when they turn in their Source Books  (some time before break if students [...]

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Six Degrees of Holden Caulfield

26 September 2009

I wanted to include some film ideas in this post that relate in some way to Salinger’s novel The Catcher in the Rye.  First on the list is Will Smith’s monologue from the film Six Degrees of Separation, an adaptation of the play by John Guare of the same name.  In it, Smith’s character plays [...]

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Multimedia Presentations and the Curse of “Slideuments”

6 September 2009

As 11th Grade English A1 classes develop their presentations on In the Lake of the Woods, I wanted to provide some resources and examples of effective presentation techniques, with the hopes that students (and possibly teachers) will continue to experiment with creative ways of presenting their ideas electronically.  By far the most useful site [...]

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“If you really want to hear about it . . . ” (Some Catcher Ideas)

1 September 2009

So begins Salinger’s now infamous The Catcher in the Rye, and Holden’s first clue to readers that he is going to stylistically mimic how we speak and listen to one another–thus he chooses to replace the verb “to read” with “to hear”–instead of how we write.
After the publication of Salinger’s The Catcher in the [...]

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Perception and “Augmented Realities”

1 September 2009

“The Matrix is a system, Neo. That system is our enemy. But when you’re inside and look around. . . What do you see? Businessmen, teachers, lawyers, carpenters. . . The very minds of the people we are trying to save. But until we do. . . These people are still part of that system. [...]

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My Lai Editorial

28 August 2009

As my English A1 HL class begins to study Tim O’Briens’ In the Lake of the Woods, I came across this brief editorial for The New York Times that should provide another piece to the puzzle that we have been referring to as “the fog of war.”
The nation has finally heard a note of personal [...]

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Lord of the Flies Ideas

27 August 2009

Check out the only site I could find that has reproduced Life Magazine’s article “A Gamble on Novices Almost Works too Well,” which reports on the recruiting and filming of the 1963 version of the movie Lord of the Flies, directed by Peter Brook. In the article, Brook discusses some of [...]

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9th Grade Writing Folders

13 May 2009

The purpose of our 9th Grade Writing Folders is to have a place for students to collect their written work–from process to product.   Now, as we begin to look ahead to next year, we should also take time to reflect on what we have accomplished this year.
In order to complete both of these tasks, [...]

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Mira Loma Team Wins National Science Bowl

6 May 2009

By Melody Gutierrez
The Sacramento Bee
May. 5, 2009
After pointing out the correct location of the sun and a white dwarf in a Hertzsprung-Russell stars diagram, Mira Loma High School won the U.S. Department of Energy National Science Bowl on Monday at the National Building Museum in Washington, D.C.
Full Article in The Sacramento Bee

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In Defense of Sketchbooks (and Maybe Sourcebooks?)

4 May 2009

Jason Santa Maria’s website is an art project in and of itself, but his specific post on sketchbooks was fun to read (be sure to click on the Flickr link in the post so that you can peruse examples of other peoples sketchbooks).
The point is to keep doing, it’s how you get stuff done.  And [...]

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